爱吃辣的加拿大大叔
雅思托福10多年一线教学
中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫
在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货
每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”
你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个雅思大作文的高分范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，审题
3，高分范文
4，范文朗读
5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
- 题目改述
- 报告类大作文高分句型
- 展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
- 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
上题：
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
审题：
- Type: Advantages and disadvantages (report style 报告类)
- Body 1: convenience and saves time
- Body 2: encourages a sedentary lifestyle and has a negative effect on local business.
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
▲范文音频戳这里▲
A growing phenomenon within the population is that of Internet shopping. This essay shall explore both the benefits and drawbacks of this situation.
