Hello!My name is XXX.I come from Huizhou，Guangdong province which I consider is the beautiful city in China.It is my honor to have an interview today.I hope to get your recognition.With a great longing to enter the (你想要去的)，I would like to make this application.
First of all，I feel my advantage is my ability to stick to things to get them done.I have set some high goals for myself and I will try my best to finish it.However，my disadvantage is that I am not brave enough when I meet some opportunities.Therefore,I may miss some opportunities to show my ability.In the future,study and life,I will try my best to overcome them.My motto is Just do it.In my spare time,I enjoy study English and verbal communication skills in English and Chinese such as surfing websites like TED matters a lot.To conclude,practice makes perfect.English learning is no exception.What's more,as you can see I am the kind of person who has to go all out for whatever I do if I failed,I could accept it but I knew that if I did things half heartedly and they didn't work out maybe I alaways have regreat so I will try my best to use critical and independent thinking in my studies. Study enables me to develop better interpersonal skills and a spirit of cooperation.
Finally,I would appreciate it very much if you could give me the chance for further study.I believe I am the right person you are looking for. Thanks for your time,have a nice day.
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