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写有时效性的热点英语作文,或如何写有新意的个人成长类英语作文。为此笔者建议写相关英语作文作为参考:
新颖素材是“为考上一所好高中,我决定不玩手机了”, 为此“我”给TOM写英文电子邮件告诉他这件事。
分别写了两篇作文(1)和(2)篇,其中:(1)是中等水准;(2)中上等水准。
先看(1)中等水准
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? Recently, I find it necessary for me to get ready for high-school entrance examination (H.E.E.) by acquiring too much knowledge about lessons honestly to give up the use of my smartphone at present.
This helps me make an important decision on trying to give up my smartphone. It waste my time, and it lets my eyes become bad. So I try my best to let it get out of my lives. I will never take my lessons until at later time in which to concentrate more on smartphone, without giving up halfway.
All the best !
Yours
Li Hua
再看(2)中上等水准
Dear Tom,
Being your friend as one of high-school students, I write you a letter telling you about an important decision I made on giving up the use of my smartphone at present.
Thinking about this, you are likely to find it necessary for me to get ready for high-school entrance examination (H.E.E.) by acquiring too much knowledge about lessons honestly.
Smartphone is expected to be without the influence on me, that helps save so much time for me to work hard at studying lessons, on which to bring me to focus automatically in H.E.E., not always in pleasure or relaxation.
Without making me uneasy about neither reading some message nor receiving news by watching videos,all,from my smartphone in the beginning, I am always asking my teachers for questions about such lessons as Math, Chemistry or English, etc. and discussing them with my classmates.
Combining with this, at home, I have my smartphone kept in their closet or drawer which my parents are enabled to put in key, according to their views.
The above encourages me to achieve a well-ideal goal successfully of being one of high-school students days to come surely.
All the best !
Yours
Li Hua
总结:
上述两篇(中等水准和中上等水准的)英语作文,均用英语逻辑思维写作法写出,这样避免“模板套作痕迹”出现,有助于大考判(阅)卷老师给考生——升档次加分数!
要做到被升档次加分数,考生就不能把提示翻译出来再加个模板写作英语作文了。英文写作事实是逻辑思维写作需要把很多隐性的知识,如提示句背后涵义内容得挖掘出来,像是原因和结果或措施等。
如果不熟悉或不知道写作的过程、技术、体验,那么后边再给你很多的一些个提示,只能直接翻译,最后只能再“凑”很多无意义的模板了事,就只能误认为自己知道会写英语作文了,事实上这不能称之为英语作文。
明天面临着什么问题?实际上就是今天面临的短板瓶颈的问题,需要我们明天去努力解决问题(的方向)。因此必须得有问题解决的意识,这就是英语逻辑思维写作起飞的引擎。
英文逻辑思维写作之原理:英文是逻辑语言,逻辑是英语的灵魂,它不是模板语言。现在很多英语写作,没有成为主导力量——英文逻辑思维写作。而是模板套作把学生宝贵时间和巨大努力的投入都白白浪费掉了。
因此从逻辑单句到逻辑组合句(重要的是四种逻辑思维循环使用),一步一步的走。其中英文逻辑写作的进程可以缩短,但不可以省略,省略了任何一个环节,将来都要付出沉重的代价,而且早晚要补上。
由此看来,用英语逻辑思维写作英语作文必然出现创新成果,如上(2)中上等水准英文,这种英文写作的成果作品将会是层出不穷的。