短文改错题,主要考语法,另外考心细。大家总在这里面丢分,可从以上两方面进行改善,本篇文章是对高考试卷中的短文改错题,进行了一次解析。
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7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。没出错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
(1). 每处错误以及修改均仅限一词。
(2). 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My brother Donald didn’t do well in math. When the day of the exam comes, Donald sat next to Brian, which was always good at math. Donald careful copied Brian’s answers. At end of the exam, the teacher collected the papers and graded it. Then she decided to give a prize to the student who got the high grade. But it was a bit of difficult for her to make a decision, because Donald and Brian got the same grade. The teacher thought about that and made on her mind to give the prize to Brian. Donald said it was unfair. “That’s true,” the teacher said. “Therefore, Brian’s answer to Question 18 was ‘I don’t know’. Your was ‘Neither do I’.”
【答案】
【小题1】Comes—came
【小题2】Which---who
【小题3】Careful---carefully
【小题4】At 后加the
【小题5】it ---- them
【小题6】High----highest
【小题7】A bit 后去掉of
【小题8】On---up
【小题9】Therefore--- However
【小题10】Your----Yours
【解析】
试题解析:这是一片记叙文,作者讲述了自己兄弟因为数学不好,在考场上作弊并引发一系列笑话的事情。考点符合高考常考规律,难度适中。
【小题1】本文是站在现在的角度,描述过去发生的事情,纵观全文,时态用的都是一般过去式,故这里犯了时态错误,应用一般过去式。
【小题2】根据这一句前面的逗号和先行词可以判断,此处应该是who引导的非限制性定语从句,主语是人,故用Who引导。
【小题3】该句的copy为动词,为“复制,拷贝,抄袭”careful为形容词,此处应该变化为副词,因为副词来修饰动词。
【小题4】考查固定搭配,at the end of...在....结尾处,到了最后。
【小题5】考查代词用法。这里的them指代的是papers(试卷,为可数名词),该用it的复数形式them。
【小题6】考查上下文语境。根据下文可知老师是想挑选出最高分的人来颁发奖项,此处应该用最高级。
【小题7】考查小词用法。A bit 形容词 a bit of 不可数名词,区别这两个的用法,这里强调的是做出选择是困难的。
【小题8】考查固定搭配和语境。根据语境,应为make up one’s mind下定决心的意思。
【小题9】老师在这里话风一转,显然是转折关系,并非递进关系。
【小题10】考察单句语法分析。 “Your was ‘Neither do I’”这句的谓语是was,故前面应该是一个主语,而your翻译成你的...(做定语成分,起修饰作用),应该用yours(代词)来做主语。
考点:考查记叙文阅读改错,做题时要树立语境意识,切记主观臆断。
8.短文改错(每小题1分,共计10分)(请按要求改错,否则不得分!)
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下书信为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
One afternoon, when I was on my way home, the weather changed suddenly. Darker clouds were gathering. I began to feel worried so I didn’t have both a raincoat or an umbrella with me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying up home,I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei, good neighbor of mine. He offered to share her umbrella with me. We walked all the ways home. With Liu Wei’s help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help.
【答案】
【小题1】Darker—Dark
【小题2】so—because
【小题3】both—neither
【小题4】去掉up
【小题5】find—found
【小题6】good前加a
【小题7】her—his
【小题8】ways—way
【小题9】With—Without
【小题10】thankfully--thankful
【解析】
【小题1】Darker—Dark 考查形容词 。句意:黑色的乌云正在聚集;
【小题2】so—because 考查连词。句意:我开始感到着急因为我没有雨衣也没有伞;
【小题3】both—neither 考查代词。Neither nor 即不,,也不;
【小题4】去掉up 考查动词。Hurry home匆忙回家;
【小题5】find—found 考查动词的时态。And连接turned与found并列,故时态保持一致;
【小题6】good前加a 考查冠词。A good neighbor of mine我的一个好邻居,表示泛指;
【小题7】her—his 考查代词。句意:他把他的伞分享给我。He表示是男性,故用his;
【小题8】ways—way 考查名词。All the way 一直;
【小题9】With—Without 考查介词 。句意:没有他的帮助,我肯定会淋湿。
【小题10】thankfully—thankful 考查形容词 。be thankful for 对。。表示感谢;
考点:短文改错。