旧高考英语作文一篇，要求词数100词左右；而新高考写作分为小作文（80词）和读后续写（150词），那在写作过程中一些学生一定注意避免哪些问题呢？
- 词数不够或远远超出给定词数（在多于10%~20%的区间内最佳）
- 书写不美观（尽量写衡水体）
- 简单语法、单词拼写错误
- 写作文不分段
- 出现真实姓名或用作文中出现汉字
以上都是非常不可取的，那避免了这些问题怎么才能写出高分作文呢？下面以书信体作文——建议信为例，从写作布局、必备金句及优秀范文赏析和模板四个方面带大家学习一下。
通常写作之前我们需要储备一些必要的素材，优秀表达、结构和短语，大家可以参考我主页的这篇文章。写作的第一步是审题，包括三个方面：审体裁、审时态、审人称，然后是谋篇布局。就书信体而言，通常是三段式，如建议信的结构布局我们可以这样设计：
[微风]写作布局第一段：问候 写作背景（遇到问题） 目的（提建议）
第二段：提出可行建议（扩充，一定要说明为什么提这条建议，这条建议有什么用）
第三段：总结、预测可能的结果及祝愿
[微风]必备金句首段（④种选择）：
①How is everything going? I'm extremely pleased to receive your letter， from which you have asked me for my advice on how to do sth. So I’m writing to share my opinions with you.
其中from which是介词 which引导的非限
②How is everything getting along recently？I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to do sth，so I'm writing to give you some suggestions /tips.
其中more than adj 表示很，非常=extremely adj,非常高级的表达； asking for my advice on how to do sth是现在分词短语做后置定语（高级结构）
③ How is everything going? Knowing /Learning that you are having difficulty in doing sth, i'm writing to give you some suggestions.
其中knowing/learning that...为现在分词作原因状语
④ How are you doing these days? I'm sorry to hear that you don't know how to do sth. Here are some tips.其中that引导宾从
结尾：
①最后，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常开心。期待你早日回复！
In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful/ practical. Looking forward to your early reply.
②以上是我的建议，希望对你有所帮助。期待收到你的来信。
The above are my suggestions, which I hope are of great use to you. Looking forward to hearing from you.其中which引导非限，句子使用了be of adj 抽象名词的结构
③如果你接受我的建议，我相信你会很快在…方面变得更好。
If you follow my advice, I hold the firm belief that you will make much progress in…
if引导条件状从，that引导同位语从句，对belief进行解释说明
一些好的表达和结构：
I have learned with much delight that 从句，我很高兴地了解到…
It came as no surprise to me because…对我来说并不惊喜，因为
寻求建议 ask sb for advice（建议：advice、tips、suggestions）
处理 deal with/handle/cope with/tackle
遵循/接受我的建议：follow/accept/take my suggestions
向某人寻求帮助：ask sb for help、turn to sb for help
[微风]范文：假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter受邀去参加一个中国朋友的婚礼，他发邮件向你询问婚礼习俗以及注意事项。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 准备红包及合适的礼物
2. 衣着得体，准时到达
Dear Peter,
How is everything going recently? I’m more than delighted to receive your email, from which I learn that you are invited to attend a Chinese friend’s wedding and don’t know how to prepare, so I’m writing to give you some advice.
First of all, according to Chinese wedding custom, you ought to prepare hongbao, a red envelope containing some money. Secondly, keep in mind that you had better arrive on time or some time earlier. Additionally, you might bring a proper gift, like a cup or crystal items, which can convey your blessing. What’s more, being well-dressed will show your respect for others.
All in all, I hope these advice will be of great help to you and you will have a good time at the wedding.
Yours,
Li Hua
优点：from which I learn that …， from which引导非限，that引导宾从；containing some money是现在分词短语作后置定语；keep in mind that…that引导宾从；which can convey your blessing， which引导非限；being well-dressed will show your respect for others.其中，being well-dressed为动名词短语做主语。
[微风]必备模板Dear XXX,
How is everything going? I ’m more than delighted to receive your letter/email. Knowing/Learning that you have difficulty in doing sth, I’m writing to give you some suggestions/tips （on how to do sth）
First of all/To begin with, you are supposed to do sth so that you can ……. What’s more, it’s important for you to do sth. In this way, ……. Last but not least, doing sth is of great benefit to sth. /has a positive/good impact on sth.（也可用句式It’s a wise idea to do sth）. That is because….
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and become better (make progress/succeed). Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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