高考英语《每日一篇英语作文》DAY.11
每日一篇高考作文，真题 满分范文 提分句
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假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter沉溺于网络游戏不能自拔，甚至不听父母劝阻想要离家出走。请根据以下要点提示，写信劝他放弃这个想法。
1.网瘾的危害；
2.要尊重父母并道歉；
3.建议他管理好自己的时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents. ______________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents.
I think it's unwise to make such a decision. Addicted to playing online games, you are not only wasting your valuable time but also hurting the feelings of your parents. Judging from your last letter, your parents are living a simple life to save every penny for your future. Therefore, wouldn't it be reasonable for you to respect them, have a talk with them and apologize? Meanwhile, you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time, such as playing sports with your friends, learning a new language, etc.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本文体裁为书信。语言方面，尽量以简单句为主，表达时多用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时，兼顾高级词汇和复杂句式，提高作文的档次。内容方面一定要全面，
1.网瘾的危害；
2.要尊重父母并道歉；
3.建议他管理好自己的时间。
此外，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。结构方面，多用一些过渡词。另外，书写要规范，标点要正确。字数控制在100左右。
【亮点短语】
1.because of因为；
2.not only...but also...不但……而且……；
3.have a talk with和……交谈；
【高分句型】
1. I'm sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents.（that引导宾语从句）
2.I think it's unwise to make such a decision. （宾语从句）（it做形式主语）
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