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你好呀,我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,我们来解读2021年12月18日的大陆雅思大作文真题。老规矩,以下是正文目录:
1,题目
2,审题
3,高分范文
4,范文朗读
5,范文地道词汇中英对照,包括:
- 题目改写
- 报告类大作文高分句型
- 展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
- 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
上题:
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for them. Why? What are effective ways to improve people's eating habits?
审题:
- Type: Report 报告类 (Reason and solution 理由&解决方案)
- Body 1: Reasons: laziness and convenience
- Body 2: Solution: Education and regulation
- Key words: why/effective ways to improve
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
▲范文音频戳这里▲
A great swathe of the population enjoys eating food that is non-nutritious and that has a deleterious effect on their health, despite knowing this is the case. This essay shall explore the reasons behind this phenomenon, along with suggesting methods that could help people to eat more healthily.
One of the major causes behind this habit of eating unhealthy food is that many of these foods are convenient to either purchase or prepare. This is especially true when it comes to the fast-food industry, whereby instead of finding healthy alternatives, many people will simply opt for the easy and time-saving method of ordering from McDonald's or KFC, or other such junk food outlets. Likewise, in today’s world of disposable goods and ready-to-use products, many have become lazy and would rather elect for opening a package of processed food than to spend the time buying healthy ingredients to cook by themselves.