To counteract this trend of unhealthy eating, probably the most effective method that can be brought to bear on this trend is that of education. Just as Mcdonald's understands that marketing to children can help secure future consumers, so society should understand that by educating the young about the benefits of eating healthy food, they are more likely to avoid unhealthy foods in their later life. Government regulations can also help to squelch peoples’ desire for foods that in the long-term can have a devasting effect on health, with such policies as an anti-fat tax or an extra tax on foods that contain additives proven to be toxic, helping to guide citizens’ dietary habits.
In conclusion, the main impetuses for people to acquire an unhealthy dietary tendency are those of convenience and laziness, and that both education, especially of the young, and governmental regulatory policies, can help to overcome this negative trend within society.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction -
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改写：
- Many people = A great swathe of the population
- like to eat = enjoys eating
- unhealthy food = food that is non-nutritious and that has a deleterious effect on their health
- even though = despite knowing
Standard Phrase for the “Report” type essay 报告类大作文通用句型：
- This essay shall explore the reasons behind this phenomenon, along with suggesting methods that
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- that
- and that
- , despite
- this is the case
- This
- , along with
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- a great swathe of 一大批；一大片；很多
- non-nutritious 没有营养的
- deleterious effect on 对……产生有负面影响；对……有有害的影响
- healthily 健康地
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Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提的点: Why?
