各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来PTE本周考到的大作文Essay真题解析,题目如下:
You need to study climate change; which area would you choose and why did you choose it?
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题目构思
对于这道题,在构思阶段需要注意的点如下:
1. climate change指的是气候变化,所以同学们选择的一定是气候变化的领域,最常见的❎错误答案如pollution之类的属于气候变化的原因,但是并不是气候变化本身!
2. 稳妥起见同学们可以统一选择Global warming来写,这个点特别好展开和写出高端词汇搭配(对的,大作文是PTE唯一需要高端词汇的题目)。
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文章结构分析/亮点词汇
在构思完毕以后,文章结构我们需要注意的点如下:
1.需要在开头和结尾段明确的提出,我需要研究的领域为global warming(替代模板中结论句)。
2.中间段两段写的为为什么选择global warming,也就是其造成的影响严重性。可以第一段写其生态影响,第二段写经济影响。(两段的话题错开,避免词汇重复)
那么,接下来这篇文章可以用到的部分79分词汇搭配如下:(同学们一定记住,PTE大作文不要单个记某个词,一定要记忆搭配!!!)
-the most pressing ecological crisis 最紧迫的生态浩劫
-loss of bio-diversity 生物多样性的消逝
-at an alarming rate 以一个令人警惕的速率
-irreversible in the foreseeable future 在可以预见的未来是不可逆转的
-coexist with 和…共存
最后,我们来看看文章范文吧:
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满分范文
* 范文没有套模板,同学们可以背诵其思路和词汇,然后套入模板句中,但是一定要注意:不要选无脑填词模板!不要选无脑填词模板!不要选无脑填词模板!
16. You need to study climate change; which area would you choose and why did you choose it?
* 首先陈述:Within the scope of climate change, it is global warming that arouses my interest the most.
* 该题也可以套入其他类似话题,比如政府面临的最严重的问题是什么
论点1:Global warming is the most pressing ecological crisis that all humanity are facing in the recent decades.
展开2: Compared with most of other recent global issues, which exerts their impacts merely regionally and can be addressed to some extent, the loss of bio-diversity resulted from continuing global temperature rising is at an alarming rate that it will be irreversible in the foreseeable future if we choose to neglect it anymore.
论点2:Despite its environmental impacts, global warming has posed greater threat to our economy than ever before.
展开2:Although it has not been implemented worldwide, many nations in the globe is already sacrificing its short-term economic development in exchange for flattering the curve for greenhouse gas emission - the primary cause of global warming, and it will be of great use to conduct an investigation into how modern economy can coexist with global warming.
秒懂逻辑:全球性影响 经济影响【一边倒】