A trip 一次旅行
根据范例可以这样简单写:
We went to shanghai last Friday.We came back last Sunday.We went there by plane . We went to the Huangpu River.We had a good time.
具体写作指点思路如下:
一、 写作思路提示>
开头
Last year I went to Beijing with my aunt.
去年我和姑姑去北京了。
中间
Beijing is very beautiful. The food in Beijing is very delicious.
北京非常美丽。北京的食物非常好吃。
结尾
I hope to go to Beijing again.
我希望再次去北京。
二.写作步骤详解>
1. 如何写好开头
①介绍自己旅行的时间、地点和人物。
示例：Last year, I went to the Great Wall with my parents.
译文：去年，我和父母一起去了长城。
②用疑问句引出下文。
示例：Do you like travelling?
译文：你喜欢旅行吗？
2. 如何写好中间
①描写目的地的天气以及景色。
示例：It is sunny in Hainan.
译文：海南的天气很晴朗。
②描写旅行目的地进行的活动。
示例：In Beijing,we saw the Great Wall. It was very beautiful.
译文：我们在日本看到了长城，它非常美丽。
3. 如何写好结尾。
①描写自己的心情。
示例：I am very happy.
译文：我非常开心。
②描写自己的收获。
示例：I took a lot of pictures and learnt a lot about Beijing.
译文：我照了很多照片还学到了很多有关北京的知识。
③表达自己的意愿。
示例：I hope to go to Beijing again.
译文：我希望能够再去北京。
经典范文
My trip to the Great Wall
This morning my classmates and I got up early to visit the Great Wall. We got there by bus. On our way to the Great Wall,we saw a lot of green fields. When we arrived there,we were very excited. We climbed the Great Wall,and it was very tiring. My friend wanted to give up,but we encouraged her and then we climbed to the top of the Great Wall. From this, I know that if you try your best,you can do anything.
译文：
我的长城之旅
今天早晨，我和同学们早早起床去爬长城。我们坐公共汽车去的长城。一路上，我们看到了很多绿色的田野。当我们到那儿的时候，我们非常兴奋。然后我们开始爬长城，真是累呀。我的朋友想放弃了，我们都鼓励她，最终我们爬上了长城高处。从这件事情，我明白了一个道理，只要尽最大努力，你就能成功。
经典范文
A trip to Yunnan
Last year I went to Yunnan with my mother. Yunnan is very beautiful. You can enjoy fresh air,green trees and blue sky there. Yunnan is not hot in summer or cold in winter, so people call Kunming,the capital of Yunnan, "the Spring City". The people there are friendly. They like to give you a hand. So Yunnan is a beautiful place with nice weather and kind people. Do you think so?
译文：
去云南旅游
去年我和我的妈妈去了云南旅游。云南非常美丽。在那里你可以享受新鲜的空气，绿色的树木以及蓝蓝的天空。云南夏天不热，冬天不冷，所以人们把云南的省会昆明叫做“春城”。那儿的人们很友好，他们喜欢帮助人。因此云南是一个天气良好、民生淳朴的美丽地方。你这样认为吗？
