感谢师友雅墨留芳，愿您对句愉快——
早安吉祥，五一快乐！[作揖][作揖][玫瑰][玫瑰]
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长空飞雁过寒江，渐起西风秋渐凉。
远眺苍山枫似火，————
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（一）续句诗部分——
标题、立意、意境等，师友您自拟——
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出句：长空雁远
出句：西风叶落霜满地
出句：枫红似火山如黛，十分秋色
出句：长空飞雁，镜湖波照影
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（二）楹联部分——
师友请随意选择，开心就好——
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另附——
落落原创诗词，抛砖引玉——
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七绝／秋江晚照
长空飞雁过寒江，渐起西风秋渐凉。
远眺苍山枫似火，萧萧红叶舞斜阳。
——新韵╱十唐╱2023.05.01
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落落诗词，原创首发————
——2023.05.01
